He wished he’d bought that rocking chair she’d always wanted, where she could sit and read the morning paper and sip that obnoxiously expensive tea.
There, exactly 55 words. And while I feel compelled to add a smiley face over here, I won't
Friday, January 15, 2010
55 Fiction
So Weirdo Guy, in his blog, out of utter boredom, he claims, did this. 55 Fiction is where you attempt a short story in 55 words. Here's my attempt. Don't be too harsh.
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oi that was nice...there. good going. btw the header image is another one.
ReplyDeleteNo, I think it manages to communicate without the smiley face, just right...
ReplyDeletep.s - typo in the spelling of "thought" :-) A smiley here, is more appropriate to overcome the awkwardness of having to point out a typo to a writer....
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ReplyDelete^bullshee
ReplyDeleteyou shouldn't be pointing out typos you know.... that's not very nice of you
now look at me for example. i appreciated the good writing without pointing out the typo in the first line where sharanyaa typed she's instead of she'd and i-
motherf-
me and my big mouth
:D
@ Bullshee & Weirdo : FANKS for pointing that out... If any of you read my first post I warned the junta about my Typo-Queendom...
ReplyDeleteI generally proof read though. Dunno what happened this time.
@ Vagabond: Thank you